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My Poem

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salamander
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My Poem

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Title: What Path to Hoe?

This evening I find, to the sky I gaze,
the mind behind my eyes seems far away.

In my future, I hope my shoulders lighten,
but at present every thought makes them tighten.

With the wind pressing upon me,
how do we unwind is my plea.

I ask myself, "Do I follow the flow?"
Or do I force aside my woe?

What path to hoe?
It's been 32 years since one of MN's four major sports teams has been to the Championship/Superbowl.
Every single year is failure until we win one. 4 teams, 32 years. That's roughly 128 consecutive failed seasons.
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weimy froob
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Re: My Poem

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salamander wrote: Wed Jun 12, 2019 4:46 pm Title: What Path to Hoe?

This evening I find, to the sky I gaze,
the mind behind my eyes seems far away.

In my future, I hope my shoulders lighten,
but at present every thought makes them tighten.

With the wind pressing upon me,
how do we unwind is my plea.

I ask myself, "Do I follow the flow?"
Or do I force aside my woe?

What path to hoe?
keep writing. you'll work your way out of your rough patch eventually. i'm a true believer that at the end of the day happiness is a choice.

where there's a will-there's a way.
FLYING_FINN'SSIDEKICK
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Re: My Poem

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salamander wrote: Wed Jun 12, 2019 4:46 pm Title: What Path to Hoe?

This evening I find, to the sky I gaze,
the mind behind my eyes seems far away.

In my future, I hope my shoulders lighten,
but at present every thought makes them tighten.

With the wind pressing upon me,
how do we unwind is my plea.

I ask myself, "Do I follow the flow?"
Or do I force aside my woe?

What path to hoe?
I really liked your poem Salamander , Keep it up!! Good stuff
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DonaldDouchebag
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Re: My Poem

Post by DonaldDouchebag »

The term is "row to hoe."

People don't hoe paths, my dude.
Like that, y'all, pop some more shit.
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salamander
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Re: My Poem

Post by salamander »

Thank you all, thank you all. I forgot I even posted this.
It's been 32 years since one of MN's four major sports teams has been to the Championship/Superbowl.
Every single year is failure until we win one. 4 teams, 32 years. That's roughly 128 consecutive failed seasons.
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